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ophélia is on page 55 of 422
“If I can ask, where am I? And who are you?” “That’ll be explained to you in a little while. Mallory, by the way,” the woman added. “My name, it’s Anne Mallory.” This was a relief, there are way too many characters (8+) introduced without putting name to a description.
May 30, 2025 08:17AM
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ophélia
ophélia is on page 75 of 422
oh good god, 24 pages of straight exposition
May 31, 2025 01:34PM
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ophélia
ophélia is on page 42 of 422
Three different "slender females" have been described so far in this book. Page 10 (Moira?), Page 12 an Indian woman (Aishwarya?), Page 42 someone unnamed clad in black. I can't readily associate anyone by their physical description. Poor character descriptions.
May 29, 2025 01:29PM
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ophélia
ophélia is on page 19 of 422
Probably the tenth time in just as many pages somebody has sneered and snarled something.
May 29, 2025 01:10PM
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ophélia
ophélia is on page 14 of 422
"Three long, serpentine wisps of silver-grey, like streamers of light, coalesced into being behind the blade’s path, slithering like eels to the foot of the dais."

Very good sensory synesthesia.
May 29, 2025 12:59PM
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