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Z
is 26% done
Too much exposition. The plot was interesting, but it’s going on for too long with no major progress. And the world is a bit weird/off.
— May 31, 2025 01:44PM
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is 36% done
This is slightly too urban for me. There’s a way to world-build in a urban setting, but I hate the way it’s done here. It’s not as lively as it could be.
— Jun 10, 2025 02:11PM
