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A low 3/5 on this. Maybe could’ve done with another draft?
I’ve been thinking what it is that really bothered me about it but I think it is the lack of identity. I don’t know what/who this book is or its audience.
Some nice mix of perspectives (1st, 2nd, 3rd) but dawdled far too long in some places and didn’t expand in others.
— Jun 03, 2025 05:17AM
I’ve been thinking what it is that really bothered me about it but I think it is the lack of identity. I don’t know what/who this book is or its audience.
Some nice mix of perspectives (1st, 2nd, 3rd) but dawdled far too long in some places and didn’t expand in others.
