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Aidan
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Poor writing, quite a bit of crappy foreshadowing that gets revealed within the same page or a little later, telling instead of showing, opportunity writing I guess I could call it. Things are just stated, they’re not connected or led up to, they’re just placed there and then written about. I’m getting some laughs at least.
— Jun 01, 2025 09:20AM
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Aidan
is on page 31 of 274
I’ve gotta say, I’ve been to a mega church before and the book described the experience spot on. Welcome committee, coffee bar, feeling like you’re at a concert, crazy lights and an overly loud praise band. Slightly cultish feeling.
— May 31, 2025 08:55AM
Aidan
is on page 11 of 274
Seriously? We’re introduced to Jono, nothing wrong with him, seems okay, just didn’t need that tidbit about his job in a romance book... that is probably marketed to women… I can tell this was written recently. I’ll give the book the benefit of the doubt and hope it’ll be cute and not go downhill. It’s a free read from kindle so I can’t complain too much!
— May 31, 2025 08:04AM
