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How does one express like… when the writing style doesn’t quite match what you’re reading??
One MC is very modern and one is an orc, who just kinda reads like a normal dude but add some made up words/places/animal names because ✨fantasy✨ I’ve been getting this a lot with books set in non-human worlds and I don’t know how to describe it? Like it’s not period accurate??? But it’s not a period of time 🤣
Jun 09, 2025 06:13AM
Claimed by the Orc Emperor (Orc Mate Selection #1)

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message 1: by Erk (new)

Erk I feel this so hard, but I still read none the less hahahaha


message 2: by Erin (new)

Erin I hear that! The characters and dialogue need to fit the world, whether a time and place that ever existed or not. Alas, it is not a new problem, as one has only to read some of the “golden age of science fiction” to read of 1950’s American men smoking their pipes in a distant future, etc.


Chelsea Erk wrote: "I feel this so hard, but I still read none the less hahahaha"

Oh for sure, same, hahahahaha I’m still reading too but I do hope to come across some orc smut where the orc pov actually feels like im in a fantasy realm or inside the head of a orc character ahhahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣


Chelsea Erin wrote: "I hear that! The characters and dialogue need to fit the world, whether a time and place that ever existed or not. Alas, it is not a new problem, as one has only to read some of the “golden age of ..."

The characters and dialogue need to fit the world is exactly what I’m feeling!!!!! The orc was feeling so contemporary but with the cover of some made up fantasy words, and it wasn’t working for me ahahah.
Oh boy? That sounds like an odd mix of things???? 🤣🤣


message 5: by Elena (new) - added it

Elena Melanson That looks like a good book....


Chelsea Elena wrote: "That looks like a good book...."

It was okay 🤷🏼‍♀️🤷🏼‍♀️🤷🏼‍♀️🤷🏼‍♀️hehehe I’m keen to see book 2 a bit more! Hehe


message 7: by Elena (new) - added it

Elena Melanson I need to read this book. How are you


Justin Atleast we were in it together! I’m enjoying the second one a lot more.


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