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Robin
is 46% done
Just finished 'His Bear Hands'--worth the price of the anthology itself. I thoroughly enjoyed everything about it. The h and H were interesting and 'real' (Zoe in particular as the h here was my favorite), the secondary characters were interesting as well with potential for future stories. The writing was solid and it had a fairly decent plot for a short story. I'd give this story 5 stars.
— Sep 14, 2016 08:30AM
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Robin
is 21% done
Dragon's Succubus-a germ of a decent plot but a major fail in executing it. It was disjointed, confusing and even worse dialogue written in Scottish dialect than story 1 (unreadable in places). It also needed serious editing: Note to author-- living beings come from good stock, plants come from good stalk unless you're talking about a pod person, which you weren't.
— Sep 10, 2016 10:17AM
Robin
is 15% done
Highland Wolf Pact-- Authors really shouldn't try to write stories set in medieval Scotland (or England) without proper knowledge. Note to author--the daughter of an English earl is NOT a viscountess (the son of an earl is not even necessarily a viscount). So many historical errors and badly written Scottish dialogue to boot. That said, it had a very unique origin for werewolves and good writing technique-wise.
— Sep 07, 2016 05:27PM
