Asha’s Reviews > Daindreth's Assassin > Status Update
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is 30% done
First I thought, okay this is ... mid... The prose is not got, but not that bad. The fmc is a bit whiny but hey, she has a badass job. But gosh the further I get it the worse it gets. This book needed some really heavy handed editing. The weird exposition, the tell instead of show. FMC is tstl, mmc is a sad boy and not in the good way. I only continue b/c this feels like roadkill, horrifying but you cant look away.
— Jun 14, 2025 03:31AM
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