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Lisi
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Ah yes, another American author who uses a random german word to name their world. I mean, it´s fitting but I am sorry to disappoint you, it´s not as cool and unique, as you think. Traum just means dream. This takes me out of the story every time. I think it will be way worse in the translated version.
— Jun 16, 2025 09:51AM
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Lisi
is on page 169 of 496
even if you are not a horse girl I think that it is basic knowledge that ivy is poisonous and that goes for horses too…
— Sep 17, 2025 11:17PM
Lisi
is on page 163 of 496
it it is made out of plants it is not parchment, it’s papyrus, because parchment is made from animal skin and is derived from the citys name pergamon so please, use the correct term or think of a new but don’t mix them up. something like parchment grass has never existed and is incorrect by default if it is fantasy or not
— Sep 17, 2025 11:04PM
Lisi
is on page 162 of 496
I don‘t get the worldbuilding like are these city states? and if so, how far away from each other are they abd how big is the stonewaterkingdom exactly? I am of the impression that it is actually pretty small which makes no sense
— Sep 17, 2025 10:56PM
