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This is the second story I have read by this author.
I feel like he starts off so strong; but the last 10 pages or so fall flat.
The ending of this just felt blah to me while I really like the beginning sections of this story and the character development.
This takes place in a casino where a bartender is working. While the bartender has no immediate suspicions of this man, she later learns of his obsessions.
— Jun 19, 2025 10:22AM
I feel like he starts off so strong; but the last 10 pages or so fall flat.
The ending of this just felt blah to me while I really like the beginning sections of this story and the character development.
This takes place in a casino where a bartender is working. While the bartender has no immediate suspicions of this man, she later learns of his obsessions.
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