anonymous’s Reviews > Clouds & Daydreams: Part 1 > Status Update

“Hey it’s no big deal. I don’t care if you swear as long as it’s never at me.”

This is like the second sentence she’s ever said to the man. It’s so freaking forced and over done and unnatural. I can’t do it. DNF @20%.

“Oh yah, I so excited to be picked next by our pretty lady. My name is Vili Rantala, and I from Numoland.”
The cringe is physically painful.

Okay I can already see why I stopped reading this last time.
A. There was like no reaction when Lysse and Bailey-Rose saw each other. Just a hug and then Lysse tells her she’s his scent match…. Fell flat.
B. Why is every interaction so unnatural and long winded?? Nothing about the dialogue feels realistic in the slightest. Zero chemistry. Zero connection. It’s giving me to ick tbh.

Trying this one again, I’m in the mood for cozy right now. I started over because I literally couldn’t remember a single thing about this one.

Fmc has congenital heart failure? Sounds depressing 10 years down the line…