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The intro to this book is so overwhelming. You don’t get eased into the world, there’s just a massive info dump with world building and two main characters introduced in separate parts of a complex city, with a even more intricate caste system. Lord have mercy, why did the editor not tell the author to flesh is out or remove a character for later? Shit.
— Jun 09, 2025 01:49PM

