MathematicianLive413’s Reviews > The Trouble With Perfect Women: Book One > Status Update

Okay, so from chapter four onwards, the tense goes from present to past. Yeah, don't think that'll fly from an editor's viewpoint. Other than that, no other issues for now.

So this story is told in first-person, present tense, which is a bit odd for me since I'm used to reading stories in the past tense. No matter, I'mma carry on.