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This reads very Wattpad. Which isn't a problem for me, but an interesting choice for trad publishing.
— Jun 22, 2025 11:29AM
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Ash
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I don't believe that these characters weren't originally meant to be teens and then she aged up the story to be NHL... If there are adults out there that act like this, I hope to never meet them.
— Jun 29, 2025 11:10AM
Ash
is on page 175 of 382
The dialogue is so bad... Helena Hunting is definitely trying (and failing) to write a quirky narrator. Quirky girls collect things, they don't use weird language to describe adult situations. Also, the fact that her parents are rich and have a pool house that she is living in, and her whole personality is being broke... like really?
— Jun 28, 2025 09:07AM
