Snailmail’s Reviews > The Tales of Arcana Fortune > Status Update

Right now I’m having an issue with the pacing, I understand it’s a stand alone and there’s a lot to get through but it wouldn’t hurt to make it a few pages extra if just to slow down the start of the book. There’re scenes where the problems are solved way too quickly like they’re searching in the library and instead of describing the search it just cuts to “alright let’s take a break down”.