Cyndel Jones’s Reviews > Blindsided By Fake Love > Status Update

I've enjoyed this book quite a bit. But I'm at the conversation in her kitchen just after the misunderstanding, and I'm annoyed. His behavior doesn't match the situation, esp after her behavior, once he arrives. This scene needed reworking.
Or if Abby really wanted his behavior this distant and aloof, the misunderstanding or MFC behavior should have been different. It just doesn't fit well.