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Ellie
is 5% done
Ooof, this is a WHOLE lot of telling... It almost has the quality of a children's story so far. Maybe the overstuffing of information will calm down as the plot gets to plotting.
— Jun 25, 2025 08:10PM
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Ellie
is 10% done
I had to put it down. The writing is so not my vibe. It reads like a constant summary of a story without just telling the story and letting information come out organically.
— Jun 27, 2025 04:22PM
