megan’s Reviews > Zakolor > Status Update
megan
is 67% done
i still want to dnf but there's only 50 min of reading time left so im pushing thru
— Jul 01, 2025 12:56PM
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megan
is 44% done
so far this reeks of amateur writing (telling the audience instead of showing), lack of suspense, poor characterization, and lack of detail that would help to immerse the reader
— Jul 01, 2025 10:19AM
