Emily’s Reviews > The Deading > Status Update

Random backstory in the epilogue to get us out of this damn story, and sudden skill manifest for Blas. Great -.-

All that way just to do ABSOLUTELY NOTHING AND LEAVE.
Just end.

Bruh, I'm not looking up "brujo" no matter how many times you repeat it without proper explanation. You introduced this late, with no foreshadowing, no nothing, I do not care, just let me leave, there's only 20 pages left.

It is way past half too late to tell us about Chango and Blas' backstory.
Also, good time to diss the Army, why not. Might as well.

Another reunion that would mean something if either of these people were characters. I don't know Chango. I don't care about Blas. This means nothing.

He literally believed that letter a handful of pages ago. Did the author forget? Blas has no new information, has gained no new insight. This is just rambling.

Hmm, what a shame all of that was offscreen now it's done and no longer matters. Everything is done and no longer matters in this story.

Going to the promised land is literally colonizer behavior, what on Earth are you on about? He's going to invade a land and use it for his purposes and then leave when he's done with it XD

And in the plot twist everyone saw coming half a lifetime ago, Victor is one of them. So surprising, so shock, so betray.
Yeah nah, that was clumsy as hell.

Oh piss off. Blas didn't deserve to get a camera from Ingram, they barely knew each other and he's an entitled little ass.