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I've found this story pretty interesting but it takes me out of it when the author is relying on this live chat feature to drive the plot, but they don't seem to understand how that works. It's written like everyone's messages are getting displayed as they type, which is possible, but it's such a rare feature for messaging that you'd have to explain that. It makes no sense to picture it the way it's written