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Bailey
is on page 195 of 778
How many times is she gonna fake us out about deaths. Like we know Diem is surviving and Tairn wasn’t obvious but I knew he wouldn’t die. I think it’s makes your book weak if you rely on faking the readers into thinking the character will die and then always bringing them back. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t want anyone to die but if you are just gonna fake us out, just don’t make them almost die
— Jul 04, 2025 12:43PM
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Bailey
is on page 386 of 778
Like I’m all for a FMC who is incredibly strong and powerful but this is a diff thing. She is better at EVERYTHING. It’s an unfair advantage and she did nothing to earn this strength. She was born with it and doesn’t even know it. It’s not fun when someone is so strong there is no equal opponent. I’m so sick and tired of her having no true threat except for her own oblivious brain
— Jul 05, 2025 05:42PM
Bailey
is on page 386 of 778
I am so fucking over this shit. Just use your goddamn blood to heal Luther. Stay with Yrselle and get answers. Stop being so blind and stupid that you don’t see what’s staring you in the fucking face. Also why the fuck can she do everything and she can’t use her 2 brain cells to figure that out?
— Jul 05, 2025 05:40PM
Bailey
is on page 316 of 778
Luther was definitely struck by goldstone don’t know why we’ve waited this long to know and if anyone else reading this book felt like it was this obvious
— Jul 04, 2025 06:08PM
