Bailey’s Reviews > Heat of the Everflame > Status Update

Like I’m all for a FMC who is incredibly strong and powerful but this is a diff thing. She is better at EVERYTHING. It’s an unfair advantage and she did nothing to earn this strength. She was born with it and doesn’t even know it. It’s not fun when someone is so strong there is no equal opponent. I’m so sick and tired of her having no true threat except for her own oblivious brain

I am so fucking over this shit. Just use your goddamn blood to heal Luther. Stay with Yrselle and get answers. Stop being so blind and stupid that you don’t see what’s staring you in the fucking face. Also why the fuck can she do everything and she can’t use her 2 brain cells to figure that out?

Omg just fucking talk to Luther already

How many times is she gonna fake us out about deaths. Like we know Diem is surviving and Tairn wasn’t obvious but I knew he wouldn’t die. I think it’s makes your book weak if you rely on faking the readers into thinking the character will die and then always bringing them back. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t want anyone to die but if you are just gonna fake us out, just don’t make them almost die