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Hanna
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I'm sorry, did the character just write a preamble to this fucking book? I think that is the worst beginning to a book I have ever read. What could possibly be the point of this? "This is our story." Yeah, no fucking shit it is. It's a romance book. I understand the concept. I almost take back every bad thing I've ever said about prologues. Whatever the hell that was, it's worse.
— Jul 06, 2025 05:18PM
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Hanna
is 8% done
The main characters have the same name. I am never going to keep Carson and Colin separate. Way, way too similar. What a bafflingly bad choice. Also, one character said the same thing twice in a paragraph. This says it was edited and proofread. Author should get her money back.
— Jul 06, 2025 05:21PM
