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Megan
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"Maybe Nell knows him."
Who the eff is Nell? I had to go back and check . I swore I had been introduced to this character because what writer just starts talking about a random person? Big surprise: no mention of her before
— Oct 05, 2016 05:21PM
Who the eff is Nell? I had to go back and check . I swore I had been introduced to this character because what writer just starts talking about a random person? Big surprise: no mention of her before
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Megan
is on page 77 of 338
She is name dropping the shit out of the Main Line. So far we have: Bryn Mawr. Ardmore. Bala Cynwyd. Villanova. Malvern. King of Prussia (mall).
— Oct 05, 2016 07:33PM
Megan
is on page 52 of 338
I can't understand a goddamn thing that's happening in this book because the writer's sentences are so convoluted!
"The bottle of pills...clanking together like a baby's rattle as she walked."
That's not a sentence!!
(An editor should have ended the previous sentence with a colon and then this fragment should have came after)
— Oct 05, 2016 05:18PM
"The bottle of pills...clanking together like a baby's rattle as she walked."
That's not a sentence!!
(An editor should have ended the previous sentence with a colon and then this fragment should have came after)

