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Megan
Megan is on page 77 of 338
She is name dropping the shit out of the Main Line. So far we have: Bryn Mawr. Ardmore. Bala Cynwyd. Villanova. Malvern. King of Prussia (mall).
Oct 05, 2016 07:33PM
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Megan is on page 42 of 338
"Maybe Nell knows him."

Who the eff is Nell? I had to go back and check . I swore I had been introduced to this character because what writer just starts talking about a random person? Big surprise: no mention of her before
Oct 05, 2016 05:21PM
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Megan
Megan is on page 52 of 338
I can't understand a goddamn thing that's happening in this book because the writer's sentences are so convoluted!

"The bottle of pills...clanking together like a baby's rattle as she walked."

That's not a sentence!!

(An editor should have ended the previous sentence with a colon and then this fragment should have came after)
Oct 05, 2016 05:18PM
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