Lana’s Reviews > Eclipsed Empire > Status Update
Lana
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Someone. Take. The. Commas. Away. From. This. Author.
It’s not doing what she thinks it’s doing.
Seriously. I enjoy the books and think they’re quick easy reads but this is ridiculous.
— Jul 16, 2025 07:32PM
It’s not doing what she thinks it’s doing.
Seriously. I enjoy the books and think they’re quick easy reads but this is ridiculous.
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Lana
is on page 125 of 248
Five. Times. Now. This. Author. Has. Decided. To. Destroy. My. Eyes. With. Excessive. Commas.
Seriously, I’d be having a decent time if not for the ridiculous attempts at making a character sound angry. Who was editing this? Why didn’t they say anything? They did the author dirty.
— Jul 17, 2025 04:50PM
Seriously, I’d be having a decent time if not for the ridiculous attempts at making a character sound angry. Who was editing this? Why didn’t they say anything? They did the author dirty.
