Claire Blind Reader’s Reviews > The Fool's Errand > Status Update

-I'm not even sure what these two are laughing at. The stuff they're saying isn't funny.
-Lars' chapters at this point are entirely pointless. They boil down to oggling her in wonder, thinking about leaving, then being astounded by her... intelligence? Beauty? Who knows. And more worship. I don't even know what his mission is.

-this destiny thing is so vague, I keep waiting for more information but it's just Lars and Emelee bitching and judging the people on ACTUAL adventures.

-rando drunk guy butt's into a conversation completely out of nowhere to show how protective Lars is (and by product showing his full of shit he is. I thought you would dissolve the world Lars! I thought you were an evil man, Lars! Being bad ass only works if you follow through!)

-wait, he asked her a benign question and she *completely* forgot to follow up about the trial his "friend" went on?

-omg this book should've just been about everything that happened before Lars got there because that's all we're reading about right now anyway. Is there a plot beyond this boring ass town?

- Lars isn't coming across as tough. So scary he makes men wet themselves by lifting an eyebrow? Yeah, OK. This is so goofy and this dude is written so poorly oh no!
-his insta love is weird and I'm not into it. Like what about her? He keeps listing traits we nor he has seen. She's smart? Where? I'm not harping on the lady but we ain't had none of that so far!

-way, WAY too much internal processing and flowery language so far. Like I've been sitting in this tavern with nothing happening for so long now omg. And just the two main characters snarking about how much this town sucks.