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So she did have an editor! Michelle Rosquillo. Deary me. Those thanks were totally undeserved.

"It seems like she got the best of both of us before stabbing us both in the back by stabbing Father through the chest and throat."

Even on the last page she could not help herself. I bet these things sounded brilliant in her head.

"Hurt is what I know how to do, not what I know how to help."

WTF DO YOU MEAN!! Geezus christ!

"She is a good beyond my grasp, one that I am not worthy of glimpsing let alone grabbing hold of."

🤔 ...que?

"Only you can make my name sound worth saying."

🤦‍♂️😐🤨
This sentence just made my face worth palming.

"...and then all I feel is blissful sleep."

I never realized you can actually feel sleep, probably because I'm not an author 🤷

"He pulls me impossibly closer (...)"

😐 I just 🫣😮‍💨

"He sits up slightly (...)"

...how do you sit up slightly?

"There's no trace of the worried male only moments ago."

...que??

WHAT HE FUCK DOES THIS MEAN

"The tension between us pulls taut, like an invisible tether connecting the two of us."

So many unnecessary words! Yes, the tension between you, we KNOW it connects the two of you, you already said it five words ago. Full stop after "invisible tether" would have made this sentence complete and far less awkward-sounding.