hafsi’s Reviews > Twisted Love > Status Update
hafsi
is 30% done
Really bad dialogue so far - can tell her writing has improved a lot in later works
— Jul 25, 2025 04:16PM
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hafsi
is 41% done
Very juvenile so far and doesn’t feel as slow burn as it should given Alex’s nature - some pacing issues are apparent. Also I hate a nickname out of nowhere
— Jul 25, 2025 05:04PM
