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Oh cool, the villain is HUMMING OMINOUSLY.

"For...for what you have done this night, I will not give you an easy death."

What the FUCK are you talking about, you clown? You were ALREADY "not giving him an easy death." The whole reason he was able to do ANYTHING this night is because you've strung him along instead of just killing him your stupid OP magic. But sure. If drawing things out 4 TEH EBULS is the problem, doing it more is surely the solution.

"At the failure of his magic, all desire for subtlety fled him."

Any subtlety that Tuiloch's character had fled ages ago.

Seriously? Tuiloch's been doing this for a hundred years, and nobody's thought to just...block their ears before now?

"She fingered the clay in her pocket and wondered when she'd have the chance to stop her ears without any of them seeing what she did."

Just say you need to go to the bathroom.

"Though her every cell and fiber shrank from the task..."

Is Fion familiar with cells? Seems like there's a lot of little things like that, that just take me out of the setting.

"Long ago, my name was Yinadral. Does that name mean anything to you?"

No. That name means jack to me. If you want a dramatic reveal, you should probably try, y'know, setting it up beforehand.

A moose?! Are we not going for pseudo-European fantasy setting?

And suddenly Kern has a power to sense magic?

Ainsy might be the love interest, but Fion has become the female lead.