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Lee
is 43% done
Okay, so the magnetism idea is cool and works with what we've been told... EXCEPT... are you telling me he's never worked with metal tools at the vineyard and had a mishap? Surely that would've happened enough times to become a noticeable pattern.
— Jul 28, 2025 04:05PM
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Lee
is 95% done
I like that they go through the "official" channels to get together rather than going for a big dramatic "we love each other, and if you can't accept that, we'll run away!" or some nonsense
— Jul 29, 2025 08:14AM
Lee
is 63% done
And then they're having sex within like a day of knowing each other :\ like, that's expected for mm, and of course the pace is gonna be fast when it's such a short story.. but you dropped the "demisexual". I get that everyone is different, but this does not fit with my understanding of demisexual.
— Jul 29, 2025 06:29AM
Lee
is 50% done
Sooo I appreciate the mention of Tarik being demisexual, but he doesn't actually seem to be written as such. He's showing/thinking a lot of sexual interest towards Sander quite soon after meeting, but not mentioning feelings or emotional attraction.
— Jul 29, 2025 05:40AM
