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I finished the first short story—honestly, the writing is abhorrent. there’s great concepts, and there are lines that are pretty good, but the writing style is all over the place.
Jul 29, 2025 07:22PM
The Melancholia of the Grotesque

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it’s so hard to dictate what part of the chapter “The Picture of Ophelia’s Corpse” is the letter written to Fern (who doesn’t exist?), or the narrator. 😭
Jul 29, 2025 07:33PM
The Melancholia of the Grotesque


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