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The jumping from perspective to perspective is bothering me. Especially because you can tell that there are secrets that the author is wanting to reveal to the reader when it’s revealed to the main character, but then they go to the perspective of the individual that knows the secret and they have to be weird and cryptic.
And annoying.
Just stay with the main character! Or let the reader be in on the secret!
— Jul 31, 2025 12:05PM
And annoying.
Just stay with the main character! Or let the reader be in on the secret!
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Jul 31, 2025 12:30PM
I had to dnf this lol. It started to time skip more than I would like and I was just getting bored. Good idea, poor execution.
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