Sheila’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

I really couldn’t care less about all the fight scenes - and the characters :/

Ok so the password for the book might be a dragon name right? „Their first love - is their dragon.“
And of course she dated a prince… she is starting to feel Mary-Sue-ish.
It starting to feel very predictable so I am making a crazy guess: did the crown prince make his twin disappear because he was older/he could be king?

Is Halden her „First Love“?

So they’re going to be related or something like that - right?

Ah ok because whatever they signed pardoned „everything“ they did before? Ok. It did sound like they were talking specifically about the abandonment before so having to piece that together is just annoying. I do understand that you don’t want to spoon feed the reader everything but stuff like that shouldn’t be so complicated.

Ok so she messed with the wardstone and they (the Senarium!??) are angry about it / or not? and want to punish her. Then she admits she did it and reminds them they already signed something and now they can’t punish her? Whyyy. I. Don’t. Understand. Anything. Why is she there so much written in the book but nothing is said?

It took me so long to get what they are up to! I’m reading Violets POV, why do I never know what’s going on 🥲 VIOLET WHATS THE PLAN!?

Lewellen, Lindell, Hadley, Ewan Faber!??
I'm sorry to this man!