Lucy’s Reviews > Love, Luck, and Lone Star Nights > Status Update

I want to point out that the story could end right here and I would not feel like there are any plot holes deep enough to matter.

Issues that caused breakup resolved? Check.
Love admitted and said? Check.
Past "angst" cleared? Check
No suspense.
No issues with new business.
They're going on vacation together.

Are we going to be dealt a 200 page epilogue now?

"'I've always been yours,' I whispered fiercely. 'And I always will be.'

She says, right after she admits that if her fiancé had NOT left her at the altar and ghosted her completely, she would be married to another man now.

There is not enough angst for the pacing to be set like this. 39% of the way through and we're both admitting we're in love and also not sure how we feel about each other? Scratch that. Collin is sure about everything. Bonnie is the one being exhaustingly weird about the entire dynamic.

I know this sounds bitchy, but I'm already annoyed with the badly conferred time jumps.

The time jumps and sudden flashbacks make this a bit difficult to follow. We go from one day to the next with just a break in sentences and it doesn't necessarily make it apparent.