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Mark
is 79% done
I still have no idea what is happening, despite Kern just disintegrating into… a murder of crows?
There was clearly something already on Imir and there is some kind of Inner Light or time loop going on. But as to the specifics? No idea.
— Aug 02, 2025 03:19PM
There was clearly something already on Imir and there is some kind of Inner Light or time loop going on. But as to the specifics? No idea.
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Mark
is 99% done
Things wrap up quickly, but it’s quite satisfying. A version of Liff is saved and another type of consciousness is added to the Human-portiid-octopus-corvid culture.
— Aug 08, 2025 01:16PM
Mark
is 94% done
I cannot decide whether it is sadder for the colony to have lived and died and then been re-simulated or for it to have never existed at all.
— Aug 07, 2025 03:44AM
Mark
is 88% done
I was mostly correct, it is an Inner Light situation but with a twist.
Incredibly sad.
I suspect Miranda / the Nod lifeform can absorb the colonists somehow and allow them to live again in some sense, although they are big on consent now and the simulated Imiri cannot really give it.
— Aug 03, 2025 12:59AM
Incredibly sad.
I suspect Miranda / the Nod lifeform can absorb the colonists somehow and allow them to live again in some sense, although they are big on consent now and the simulated Imiri cannot really give it.
Mark
is 75% done
This is an odd story; the flashback give context and hints, but the main story is going in circles without adding much (beyond Miranda being related to what is happening, somehow). It’s not bad, I assume it’s intentional and I’m enjoying but it’s definitely… odd.
— Jul 29, 2025 01:06PM
Mark
is 45% done
Okay, got a flashback now where Liff is described as the first child born in Imir and Miranda is there.
Hmm, suspect this might be some kind of Star Trek Inner Light situation where the Nodan Miranda is reliving the life and death of the colony?
Maybe.
— Jul 19, 2025 10:54AM
Hmm, suspect this might be some kind of Star Trek Inner Light situation where the Nodan Miranda is reliving the life and death of the colony?
Maybe.
Mark
is 32% done
The critique of authoritarianism and fascism from the point of view of a child is very well done. Uncle Molder can get in the bin.
— Jul 16, 2025 07:13AM
Mark
is 23% done
The birds are fun. Combing them with the spiders, octopuses, humans and Nodans should be a blast.
— Jul 15, 2025 03:19PM
Mark
is 16% done
Standard ark-ship setup.
Now we have some more advanced people spying on the resulting community. Judging by names and inner monologues we have spiders and possibly Nodans at least.
Promising!
— Jul 15, 2025 02:11PM
Now we have some more advanced people spying on the resulting community. Judging by names and inner monologues we have spiders and possibly Nodans at least.
Promising!

