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Also i don’t like Griff… he’s just so mediocre. Almost as if his character archetype is missing something but I can’t quite put my finger on it.

“Did it have anything to do with how he knew me?”

Again.. so much repetition. It feels like the author is talking down to the reader by overexplaining everything. The emotions and thoughts are already clear, so all the extra elaboration feels unnecessary and frustrating. Fgs 🤦🏻‍♀️

“Don’t worry about us.”

The family, side characters, aren’t fleshed out properly. They almost sound monotonous.

“03:26. Only decisions of the heart, not the mind, happened at this hour.”

“It was too good to be true.”

“I wanted to leave the Lows, leave Pointe.”

Okay okay we get it… it’s being too repetitive now. Can we move forward with the rest of the story now, please?

“our Tier provided the food, yet we starved.”

“Dead?”

Bruh I forgot the blurb and this gave me such a shocker…