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Sabriel
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This has real promise but has some really obvious editing mistakes that I wouldn’t have expected to get as far as an ARC. Hopefully they can be fixed before publishing
— Aug 05, 2025 03:09PM
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Sabriel
is on page 130 of 504
Page 130 and I’ve counted 8 instances of characters “chewing on their lip”
— Aug 05, 2025 10:47AM
Sabriel
is on page 55 of 504
I’m definitely enjoying the world that’s been established so far, but I’m hoping for some better plot to show up - it’s been quite predictable and we’ve already had some reveals which feels very early
— Aug 05, 2025 07:57AM
