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Lit Reader
is 45% done
The manner in which Elizabeth faces her supernatural situation makes no sense. She oscillates between sneaky inuendo, sharing clues here and there, then shutting down the next munute becauase she must conceal her secret — why can she tell Mary so easily, and then she CAN’T tell Darcy?? She has already changed the story, why play-act the rest and pretend ignorance for propriety’s sake?
— Aug 06, 2025 02:24PM
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Lit Reader
is 85% done
Elizabeth told Mary her situation, then she LIES to Darcy by telling him that she’s told ONLY him because he is so special to her; then she tells Cnel Fitzwilliam, then she tells Jane, and so far she also goes and shares her BIG SECRET with Aunt Gardiner as well (LOL).
— Aug 09, 2025 07:21AM
Lit Reader
is 65% done
Descriptions of time slowing or slowly passing are tiresome and repetitive; plenty of clocks ticking, winds breezing, meaningful looks spreaing through several paragraphs.
The whole idea of Lizzy re-living the whole story all over again (only screwing it this time around) makes little sense unless there is a goal to achieve, or a task to complete. Nothing clear so far at this stage!
— Aug 08, 2025 02:24PM
The whole idea of Lizzy re-living the whole story all over again (only screwing it this time around) makes little sense unless there is a goal to achieve, or a task to complete. Nothing clear so far at this stage!
