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finished the 1st part and I’m still feeling confused.
I can easily see how these are his first two stories written as someone who has read a good handful of his books. curious to see where the second story goes, and if it’s as choppy and sporadic as “hear the wind sing”.
I enjoyed trying to understand his writing as he figured out his process, but many parts felt like it was missing world building info.
— Jul 24, 2025 01:50PM
I can easily see how these are his first two stories written as someone who has read a good handful of his books. curious to see where the second story goes, and if it’s as choppy and sporadic as “hear the wind sing”.
I enjoyed trying to understand his writing as he figured out his process, but many parts felt like it was missing world building info.
