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Jeff Dawson
is 4% done
The singular use of the constant name tag, Shane is horrendous! The story is centering around him yet the author is compelled to use his name every other sentence, or so it feels. Hope this gets better real quick.
— Oct 25, 2016 07:59PM
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Jeff Dawson
is 37% done
Way too many name tags! It's interfering with the action.
— Oct 26, 2016 06:35PM
