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is 57% done
i’m hate reading this POS book so i can finish a stupid reading challenge filled with garbage. this one is “debut darlings”.
so awful. was there even an editor? i suspect part of it is the dreadful narrator, but the writing is truly terrible.
the MCs are so unlikeable and creepy. every chapter is more ludicrous and rambling than the last.
it’s just boring, poorly written porn.
— Aug 12, 2025 02:31PM
so awful. was there even an editor? i suspect part of it is the dreadful narrator, but the writing is truly terrible.
the MCs are so unlikeable and creepy. every chapter is more ludicrous and rambling than the last.
it’s just boring, poorly written porn.
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