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Brandi Poage
is on page 21 of 261
Tapping out on page 21, so glad this was a Kindle Unlimited get and not something I spent money to get. I hate to bash something that someone put their time and effort into, and I am sure this has the good bones to be a great book. It needs an editor to help flesh out scenes, and smooth out the rough edges.
— Oct 27, 2016 07:49AM
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Brandi Poage
is on page 8 of 261
Okay, really I am only on page 8 and I am ready to stop reading this book. How many times can you start a sentence with I, this book needs an editor to help out quite a bit.The immediate body shaming, the "get your head out of the gutter" comment to the reader, the "blah, blah, blah" to the reader. If it is not worth explaining, then it is probably not worth writing. I hate to be hard on a book so quickly, but :(.
— Oct 26, 2016 01:54PM
