Status Updates From Ace (The Brimstone Kings MC...

I can’t keep going. I tried but the writing doesn’t work for me

Tapping out on page 21, so glad this was a Kindle Unlimited get and not something I spent money to get. I hate to bash something that someone put their time and effort into, and I am sure this has the good bones to be a great book. It needs an editor to help flesh out scenes, and smooth out the rough edges.

Okay, really I am only on page 8 and I am ready to stop reading this book. How many times can you start a sentence with I, this book needs an editor to help out quite a bit.The immediate body shaming, the "get your head out of the gutter" comment to the reader, the "blah, blah, blah" to the reader. If it is not worth explaining, then it is probably not worth writing. I hate to be hard on a book so quickly, but :(.

And we are crying again.....

I can usually overlook grammatical errors and typos, but damn it, you're as in you are not your!!!!

"Oh God Peaches. Thank you so much for this chance. I promise you won't regret it." And right there Ace has lost all of his alpha male street cred. Does anyone have a backbone in this book?!?

Now I am not a cryer but Alison has cried more in the first 18% of this book than I have in the last 18 years of my life. And all at a party at the MC clubhouse....