Sofia Kalamata’s Reviews > Flashlight > Status Update

This was one of my most anticipated reads of the year however I’m finding the writing a bit off? Some commas are not present where they should and give a different unintended meaning to sentences, also it’s kind of written as if the reader is stupid? For example:“When the flashlight fell, it landed almost noiselessly in sand.This fact—that the flashlight, in falling, landed almost noiselessly in sand”… like seriously