Ethan Michaels’s Reviews > Pines > Status Update

Ethan Michaels
is 50% done
Although the plotline continues to hold interest, predictability not only continues, it is expected.
Particularly the now introduced romance trope.
The 2nd 25% of the book is more skimmable than the 1st 25%.
Accordingly, most of what is being skimmed is bloat, which has become more dominant.
Strongly suspect the reason for this is because the author was aware, from his original sketches, this was to be serialized.
— Aug 15, 2025 01:42PM
Particularly the now introduced romance trope.
The 2nd 25% of the book is more skimmable than the 1st 25%.
Accordingly, most of what is being skimmed is bloat, which has become more dominant.
Strongly suspect the reason for this is because the author was aware, from his original sketches, this was to be serialized.
Like flag
Ethan’s Previous Updates

Ethan Michaels
is 75% done
Skim, baby, skim!
First miss on a prediction though.
— Aug 20, 2025 10:06PM
First miss on a prediction though.

Ethan Michaels
is 25% done
Acceptable plotline, predictable however.
Overly descriptive, making it very much skimmable.
— Aug 12, 2025 08:56AM
Overly descriptive, making it very much skimmable.