bex ~•~ (Telemachus’ Version) ~•~’s Reviews > God of Fury > Status Update

pov: it’s only funny for the author and is just the cringiest thing you’ve ever read on page 😭🙏
”What’s so special about having one’s dick sucked?” Creigh asks.
“Uh, what’s so special about the sun? The moon? The ecosystem. I can go on forever. Jesus, spawn, you’re making me look like a bad mentor.” 💀💀
erm this is the fifth time you’ve called him spawn on one page wtf 🥴

guys this is so bad and im not even joking 😭🙏
also rina kent’s writing is extremely embarrassing. bran doesn’t feel emotionally stunted or filled with depth — he feels like a little emo boy written by a thirteen year old on wattpad 🥀

this scene really demands you to think that brandon’s trauma hasn’t happened yet because it hasn’t been stated yet. does that make sense? like ik what his trauma is so this scene is really denying that fact

also u guys know i can’t stand it when someone who sexually assaults the mc then becomes the love interest (shatter me, im looking at you 😑)