Ellie’s Reviews > L.A. Women > Status Update
Ellie
is 30% done
Great read so far - slight criticism is I think it could have done with tighter editing, some of the points made are a bit hit-you-in-the-face and I’m like ‘yes, I get it…’ also some of the then/now juxtapositions are slightly jarring and I’d have liked a bit more jumping so there’s less of a reveal.
— Aug 20, 2025 03:10PM
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