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is on page 101 of 475
100 pages in and there’s so many instances where it feels like the story would read so much better if it had a good editor look it over. A lot of outright telling the reader things and how to feel. Making it hard to get through at times.
— Aug 20, 2025 09:31PM
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Rose
is on page 348 of 475
The author leaves no time for readers to actually read and come to conclusions themselves or at least before the fmc spells it out for us 2 sentences after dropping the hint. And the characterization is a bit lazy. Blake calling calumn a big oaf when Rory does, not him. Or Rory using metaphors in her internal dialogue like silver bullet when she’s not a wolf. Calumn saying catch my drift???
— Aug 21, 2025 08:32PM
