Stéph’s Reviews > Arcana Academy > Status Update

75% in and there has been NO character development for our female lead at all; it's quite frustrating for the reader. She's still stubborn, ignorant, selfish and thinks she's the only one that's ever suffered in life. Who does she think she is?

Tell don't show. We're constantly told that Kaelis is a big bad evil and cruel prince but somehow all we've been shown is him being a gentle, nice and very reasonable person.