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Deanna
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Chapter 6 and I think I know what the problem is. The author started in the wrong place. This "dramatic 1st chapter" thing doesn't work when u need to set up the story first then have the call to action. Sorry but it just doesn't work like that well most of the time, whatever people say on YouTube. 5 chapters of the past to "establish the ordinary day of ur character"
— Aug 22, 2025 11:19AM
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Deanna
is on page 145 of 384
Honey, I'm on chapter 21 and there's 71 in this thing. Some of these chapters don't need to be here😭
— Dec 15, 2025 07:54AM
Deanna
is on page 86 of 384
This drama and plot are very "convenient" for the FMC so she isn't immediately BLOWN UP with everyone else.
— Oct 29, 2025 06:14PM
Deanna
is on page 34 of 384
Mkaaaay...
I have some thoughts about how this book was started, but mostly I wanna chuck South off a cliff. He's acting like such a little snot and I'm supposed to feel bad for him? Turn him into a newt. 🦎🤣😈
— Aug 19, 2025 09:09AM
I have some thoughts about how this book was started, but mostly I wanna chuck South off a cliff. He's acting like such a little snot and I'm supposed to feel bad for him? Turn him into a newt. 🦎🤣😈
